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14 Haikus
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Literature Text
I
The Fool's Carriage rolls
Choosing its heroes each day
Where will it stop next?
II
The birds wake and caw
As the sun rises and shines
One more perfect day
III
Cornered by the fox
The hare leaps and lashes out
What's it got to lose?
IV
Webs of sly deceit
Embroideries of pretense
Spider spins each day
V
Give time its due time
The thunderstorm of anger
Just precedes the calm
VI
Precipitation--
Don't fumble with umbrellas
Just accept the rain
VII
Given its due chance
The peacock will raise its tail
Craving others' praise
VIII
Paranoia comes
Conspiring against you
They're out to get us
IX
Death walks with its scythe
All life wilting before it
Willingly or not
X
All people have roles
If life had begun by chance
It would have ended
XI
Listen to your call
You can't deny your mission
And still be fulfilled
XII
The beginner's luck
Every game gives new players
Tastes of victory
XIII
With its cold embrace
Snow preserves vegetation
Awaiting the spring
XIV
Cravings are surplus
All of life's necessities
Are within hand's reach
The Fool's Carriage rolls
Choosing its heroes each day
Where will it stop next?
II
The birds wake and caw
As the sun rises and shines
One more perfect day
III
Cornered by the fox
The hare leaps and lashes out
What's it got to lose?
IV
Webs of sly deceit
Embroideries of pretense
Spider spins each day
V
Give time its due time
The thunderstorm of anger
Just precedes the calm
VI
Precipitation--
Don't fumble with umbrellas
Just accept the rain
VII
Given its due chance
The peacock will raise its tail
Craving others' praise
VIII
Paranoia comes
Conspiring against you
They're out to get us
IX
Death walks with its scythe
All life wilting before it
Willingly or not
X
All people have roles
If life had begun by chance
It would have ended
XI
Listen to your call
You can't deny your mission
And still be fulfilled
XII
The beginner's luck
Every game gives new players
Tastes of victory
XIII
With its cold embrace
Snow preserves vegetation
Awaiting the spring
XIV
Cravings are surplus
All of life's necessities
Are within hand's reach
14 haikus written 2/1/08
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I will have to disagree with Uriah's comment. Something that is straightforward doesn't mean that it is going to be forgotten. Something simple can be complex, too much wrapping makes you lose the meaning and lets you wander off it. Yes, when something is straightforward is easier to comprehend but I don't believe that is wrong. Your ideas are strong and presented beautifully, i love the 5th and 6th ones personally. You've done a great job but that doesn't mean you won't have to keep trying until you get better. This piece is an absolute fave. Well deserved as well.